https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rp4o6gVqT_c
My last pitch's feedback caused me to place an emphasis of the variability needed in this product. This charger should not be a device solely usable for a single computer, but should have outlets for as variety of different computers and phones.
Hi Joseph!
ReplyDeleteGreat job! Your idea is very unique and could be of incredible use to your target market! I also appreciated the professional setting of your pitch, as well as your attire. Just a suggestion: try being a bit more concise with your product message, maybe by supplying data or study results of how many students feel this deficiency in their everyday lives, etc. Doesn't have to be actual facts (you could just make some stuff up!), but it would make your pitch sound more viable to potential investors and the consumers you're trying to persuade to buy your product. Again, great job!
Hey Joseph,
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job in the way that you spoke in your elevator pitch. You got your point across and you did it in a really efficient and quick way. The only thing is that it wasn't as specific as it could have been but overall, I think it was good. Maybe next time (if we have to do this again), try going into detail about the different features and benefits. Great post!